Things that worked well:
- The story line was creative and myserious.
- The acting was done well.
- Match on action music.
- Good sound effects, laughing, water, news report voice over etc.
- Various different camera shots, good use of panning etc.
- Mise En scene was thought out well.
Things that could be improved:
- Titles coluld be less simple and dull.
An ex student's work, funny you found this - she works in tv now. Don't forget to apply the marking criteria when you're evaluating the work so that you become aware of the levels and boundaries.
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